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Yipes! There's a missing strip here! I'm not sure what happened, but I may have to redraw it, since I lost the original file in my recent hard drive crash.

Here's the script for this page, until I get it back up.

PANEL 1

Medium shot on Roz, with Missy reaching out to her from the stall. She looks stunned.

ROZ: Gee...

PANEL 2

Same shot. She is spinning in alarm.

MISSY: (off left) Roz? Is there something going on in there?

ROZ: Ack!

PANEL 3

Roz comes through the door, blocking it. Missy is holding up a fist as if to knock.

MISSY: Were you talking to someone?

ROZ: No-no. Just the plumbing. Must be old.

MISSY: Oh. can I just get something?

PANEL 4

Roz, from behind, holding the door shut (except for a crack). The pseudo-Missy is behind her, wreathed in steam, running her fingers along Roz's arm. Roz is turning (towards us) to hiss at her.

ROZ: NO!

ROZ: That is, the plumbing's so old it...flooded the room.

ROZ: (whisper) Stop that! I don't want it!

PANEL 5

CU on the pseudo-Missy, looking hurt.

FAKE MISSY: Do I not provide what you desire, miss?

ROZ: No! Just fade away!

MISSY: (off) Roz?

PANEL 6

Same shot. The pseudo-Missy vanishes into the steam.

PANEL 7

Roz bursts out of the bathroom. She is pushing Missy away from it forcefully.

ROZ: Never mind, the hotel staff will clean it up. We've got to get going.

MISSY: But...

PANEL 8

CU of Trish, cocking her gun.

TRISH: Whatever gets us out of here.

TRISH: Lock and load, ladies.





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